Some children spend hours every day on smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Undoubtedly, The impact of new technology development induces many
children
to spend most of their Use synonyms
time
on Use synonyms
smartphones
nowadays. From my viewpoint, It has so many reasons why they Use synonyms
use
it Use synonyms
although
it gives a negative development.
Linking Words
To begin
with, Linking Words
children
are of learning age. They always want to try and learn new things every day, including how to Use synonyms
use
Use synonyms
smartphones
. Use synonyms
Smartphones
are tools which are used to communicate with people throughout the world. It is a very useful tool. Use synonyms
However
, it has some problems when Linking Words
children
Use synonyms
use
Use synonyms
smartphones
because many Use synonyms
children
get addicted to it easily by social media on Use synonyms
smartphones
they watch videos on Tiktok or Youtube, and they don’t want to do their homework or do some exercise anymore. Use synonyms
Moreover
, some students lack communication skills because they don’t speak to anyone , only focus on their mobiles and after they Linking Words
use
mobiles for a long Use synonyms
time
, they will have eyes problem because of focusing on a small screen with radiation which has some negative effects on the eyes. These negative effects of using mobile will give many negative developments on Use synonyms
children
, Use synonyms
for example
, they will lose their focus on their studies and think about using Linking Words
smartphones
or social media all the Use synonyms
time
.
In conclusion, in my ,opinion using Use synonyms
smartphones
in Use synonyms
children
will bring many negative developments. Use synonyms
Children
should concentrate on their studies more than spending Use synonyms
time
with Use synonyms
smartphones
because if they are mostly focusing on Use synonyms
smartphones
or social media, it will lead to a lack of education in the future.Use synonyms
Submitted by pramai177 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite