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More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

#animals #verge #extinction #list
Animal extinction has been a worldwide problem.
Everyday
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, we
here
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 in the news that some particular animal is getting added to the endangered list or on the verge of extinction due to deforestation, hunting or global warming.
This
 issue is globally present and
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 affected people
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at
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 large scale. The viewpoints for the cause and solution associated with
this
 issue will be discussed in the subsequent paragraphs.
Firstly
, the one reason for animals getting extinct is deforestation. Humans are cutting
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number
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 of forests and
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trees
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tress
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trees
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 on daily basis in order to convert
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the
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land for
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being
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. To illustrate, According to the Times of India newspaper, daily on average 1000 trees are cut down for paper and land produce.
As a result
, species
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loose
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 their home and food and have to migrate to different regions. In
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addition
additon
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 to
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Global Warming
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the
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another reason for
this
 extinction.
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earth
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 atmosphere and
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 of glaciers
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 caused many species to
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loose
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 their house and food.
For instance
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the Penguins
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Penguins
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 population is decreasing day by day because the ice glaciers are melting at
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 fast pace and they cannot survive in these hot
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. There are various steps which
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government
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goverment
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government
 can take in order to mitigate
this
 issue.
First
, they can put
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 on cutting
forest
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forests
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 so that there will be no damage
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land
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of
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 these animals.
Secondly
, they can start using
green houses
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 resources which are more
ecofriendly
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 and don't lead to global warming. In Conclusion,
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Government
Goverment
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government
 can start
with
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 putting
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 on deforestation and
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 to use
green houses
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 gases so that there will be no global warming and it will help in
survival
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the survival
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 of these animals.
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