You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you found it difficult to work. Write your letter to the accommodation office at your college - Describe the situation - Explain your problems and why it is difficult to work - Say what kind of accommodation you prefer

Dear Mr Ram, I am a
third
-semester student, studying science in your college and I have been living in the college hostel room, sharing with another student. I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction with the arrangements of the room. The dom in which we are living is too small for two students.
Furthermore
, there is an unavailability of study tables, along with improper ventilation and air-conditioning.
Consequently
, with these discrepancies, it's been quite difficult to study and live here. Sometimes, we have to keep its door open to get some fresh air and
this
invites hostel disturbance.
Hence
, in these situations, it would be difficult for me to focus on my studies.
Therefore
, I would like to request you to allocate some other dom. Whether on sharing basis, but with all the basic amenities. I hope you would understand my circumstances and allocate me another room. Yours sincerely, Shivam
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