Some people encourage young children to leave their parents house as soon as they become adults while others say children should stay at their parent's house as long as possible. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

We are speaking to the abused
animals
on the streets. The shocking number of incidences of animal cruelty that are reported every day is only the tip of the iceberg; the majority of incidents go unreported.
Animals
are ignored and not given much
care
in today's society.
However
, we want to remind people that
animals
are essential to life and that they
also
 deserve human kindness and respect. since they lack the ability to communicate their feelings. Our main objective is animal
care
and
this
project raises awareness of animal protection. They will have special attention. Provision of major living components (
for example
, building sheds for dogs and cats, owning temporary feeding habits and being conscious of the needs of
animals
in case of medical
care
) by the target (which is society) will be ensured. For
this
project, we feel responsible to have adequate information on animal
care
and be aware of the various reports related to animal abuse in the region. To find out the reasons behind the lack of society’s interest in
animals
and prevent undesirable cases related to animal violence. We
also
want to demonstrate some related statistics. Our hope is to get help from specialists, responsible people and volunteers as well. We observe a substantial level of ignorance in society regarding
this
issue. As a team of animal lovers, we decided to take a leading action considering the needs of
animals
(including the points we mentioned above).
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  • personal growth
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