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In their advertising, business nowadays usually emphasises that the products are new in some way. why is this ? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

#business #emphasises #products #development
It is true that these days more
companies
 try to advertise in an attractive way in order to emphasise
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the producing new
products
. In
this
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 I will explain the factors behind
this
 fact, and express my opinion
why
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this
 can be considered
as
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a positive trend in
details
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. There are several reasons supporting inventing new
products
.
First
 of all, these people who are carrying out the responsibility of managing and selling the product want to
fulfill
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 their
first
 duty, and
accordingly
, in
this
 way، increase their sell figures in the market.
As a result
, they invent and introduce new designs and quality in their product just to maintain their sell rate above average and
moreover
, make their customers satisfied.
Secondly
, each business would like to compete with other brands or
companies
, and
therefore
, get more beneficial reactions from the customers;
in other words
, a majority of
companies
 try
to
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not
fall
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 behind their rivals in
sell
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 rate in order to make a living through
this
 difficult economical competitions of these days. I tend to believe that
this
 can be assumed
as
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a
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positive progress. By producing new things, individuals would be able to be pleased
by
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a more satisfactory
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more satisfactory products
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products
 in terms of the quality or expenses, which in some ways help them to enhance the quality of their life.
Moreover
, in a large-scale view, if each factory
try
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 its best to be the number one in its industry, an economic boom will,
therefore
, be more likely to happen which certainly benefits each member of
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society. For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that making new
products
 can be a positive development and by that, a company would be able to increase the average selling, and at the same time, have
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healthy competition with their rival
companies
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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