“You want to start your own business. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter: tell him/her about your business explain why you think it is a good idea and ask him/her for some help or advice”

#“you #business #friend #idea #help #advice”

Dear John, I hope my letter finds you in a good health. I want to share some news with you about my new idea for opening a business. As you know, I have been planning to open a restaurant in my hometown for the

last

2 years and now, I have

finally

decided to open it in the

month. I think

this

is the best time to open it as you know wedding season is coming so, I am sure people will be looking for new caterers and dishes.

Therefore

, I think

this

would be a plus point in our business sales. I have decided to open one counter for now

that is

, Biryani, and you know that in the Ferozepur area there is no similar outlet before. I would like you to give me some suggestions if you have any related to dine-in. I want people to sit there and enjoy the food. So, if you can let me know any particular type of decor which is being used these days, that would be great. All the best. Looking forward to seeing you. Regards, Shikha

Submitted by shikha_dhingra on Tue Oct 04 2022

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7 paragraphs

187 words

9.00

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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“You want to start your own business. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter: tell him/her about your business explain why you think it is a good idea and ask him/her for some help or advice”

You recently took a trip. In your absence, a friend did you a big favour. Write a letter thanking them. In your letter, include: ● what the favour was ● how this favour helped you ● an offer of compensation

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Some people think that a person can never understand the culture of a country unless they speak the language. Do you agree with opinion?