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Many working people get little or no exerciseeither during the working dayorin their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem? Give reasons for you answer and include any relevant examplesfrom your own knowledge or experience

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The given two pie charts compare data about
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 period, Educational accounted for almost a quarter in total (24%) and there was almost
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Environmental jobs. After the 11-year period, these voluntary jobs still kept attracting
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 Environmental issues (29%), followed by Sports at 25% and come
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Healthcare activities and Art were merely received 7% and 12% respectively in 2003,
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary
  • physical activity
  • health problems
  • exercise routine
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • sedentary jobs
  • sedentary behavior
  • long working hours
  • lack of time
  • lack of motivation
  • inadequate facilities
  • stress and fatigue
  • lack of awareness
  • social pressure
  • access to parks
  • recreational areas
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