In the modern world, people are no longer necessary to use food from animals or products from animals such as medicine and clothing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The human diet majorly constitute of
animals
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and animal products. Due to their nutritional value
animals
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are widely used to make medicines. Recently, an organisation named PETA (People for the Ethical Treatment of
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) has interfered in these matters and reduced animal usage by 30% globally. And I agree that in today's world they are no longer involved in any illegal activities.
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, modern technologies and science have progressed immensely and due to
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, scientists now have invented plant-based proteins which are as equivalent to proteins extracted from
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. They are not only easy to cook but
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have high nutritional values. To exemplify, a world-renowned burger chain has started replacing animal meat with plant-based meat and consumers have failed to identify the difference as it looks, smells and tastes similar.
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, several social media influencers endorse these natural alternatives so that all
animals
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can live in harmony and in their own natural space.
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, consuming these alternative options doesn't impact health as it has been observed that these natural proteins can help in reducing cholesterol and fats
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the body and improve blood sugar levels. If we talk about aquatic
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, inventors have
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substituted the fish oil which was extracted from the fish with grain oil and achieved to maintain the same health benefits. Due to
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fishing has decreased by 25% in some parts of the world.
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, as per a recent survey done by Stanford University, 65% of people prefer alternate meat options to eat when they were explained how
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were tortured and killed.
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, governments have become more active in dealing with situations.
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, farmers have
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started to search for alternatives
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of selling their
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to earn their living. They are now more involved in spreading awareness within their community. To conclude, for the betterment of the human race it is advisable to search for substitutes
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of following age-old dietary habits which can lead to the extinction of
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • plant-based alternatives
  • nutritional values
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • deforestation
  • water usage
  • ethical considerations
  • exploitation of animals
  • cruelty-free
  • humane alternatives
  • chronic diseases
  • heart disease
  • diabetes
  • cancers
  • economic opportunities
  • animal farming
  • processing
  • cultural shifts
  • sustainable products
  • media influence
  • social movements
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