A company has asked your local council to open a factory in the area where you live. You and your neighbours feel that this is not a great idea. write a letter to the local council. In your letter, you should: • state what problems this might cause • explain how it will affect you and others • suggest what you want the council to do.

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Dear Sir, My name is Shikha, and I am a resident of Acme Heights 2, Mohali. I am writing

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letter to express my concern about the plan you are making to open a Steel factory in

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area. I must say

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is not a good decision. The emission of polluted gaseous may cause many health issues in the local area people. As you know, there are many older and young people living in

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residential area. So, their health would be badly affected by the polluted gaseous.

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, where the industrial waste will be dumped? I do not think there is any nearby abandoned place where they can dump it. So, in return, they will use our parks or other open places to keep their waste, which in return makes the environment unfit for living. So, I request you to please write a letter to the company and discuss all these bad effects which can occur after opening the industry.

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, suggest to them a better open place where they can open it. I hope you will take appropriate action. Yours Sincerely, Shikha

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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185 words

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