Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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In the present age, whether it is better to educate
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and
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in separate
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rather than in mixed
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has sparked much debate. Some people assert that
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and
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should be taught in separate
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, whereas many others argue that they should be taught in mixed
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. I will explore both arguments and give my opinion. Convincing arguments can be made that
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should be educated in separate
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, and most importantly as much as nowadays people tend to disagree
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and
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are very different. The two genders in default are drawn to different things.
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are more likely to be interested in economics and finances, while
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are more likely to be drawn to literature. Of
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there are exceptions, but for the most
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teaching the two genders in separate
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would result in a capability to focus on the subjects that are more appealing
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,
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and
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tend to learn in different learning styles.
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, teaching kids in
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opens up the possibility to adapt the teaching style to be more digestible to that
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others may claim that
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are more beneficial. Perhaps the most obvious argument is that separate
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encourage sexism. Being in a separate environment all the time can lead to
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and
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not understanding each other, or even being wary of each other. And mixed
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eliminate
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issue almost completely. It is
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important to note that learning to work together despite
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differences is very important. Today our society functions on the premise of men and women working together. Having to learn that skill from scratch while
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trying to build a career is a hassle and will be challenging. It is much more straightforward if you start getting used to it right from your
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year in school. Having considered both views, I think
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and
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should be taught in mixed
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. I think the benefits outweigh the cons by a big margin.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • co-education
  • gender segregation
  • peer pressure
  • academic performance
  • gender stereotypes
  • discrimination
  • social skills
  • teamwork
  • collaboration
  • diversity
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