some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, there are lots of environmental
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due to many reasons. Some say that the
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of certain organisms of
plants
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and
animals
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. But the other opinion on
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is there are more environmental
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important than that. In
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I will discuss both statements.
Firstly
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, the loss of some
plants
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and
animals
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is a major environmental
problem
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around the world.
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, recently the Bengal Tiger is named an endangered animal because its population goes down remarkably. The reason is identified as human involvement in hunting them. And
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, Pandas in China are another species that faced
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risk. It causes the rapid cutdown of bamboo trees.
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, it shows that human activities affected to arise the main environmental
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of the loss of some
plants
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and
animals
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. According to the opinion of others, there are some more important environmental
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. Global warming, an increase in the sea level and pollution are some of them. The reason for global warming is the rise of carbon dioxide level in the atmosphere,
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is due to emissions from vehicles and deforestation sea level goes up because of global warming and it affects the meltdown of glaciers.
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, human activities affect
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the
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environmental pollution. It
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proves that mankind is behind all of these environmental
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. In conclusion, the loss of different
plants
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and
animals
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is a major environmental
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and there are some other important
problems
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too. But my opinion on
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situation is the main environmental
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is the things done by the mankind in past, in present and in future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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