The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart
depict
the Change the verb form
depicts
prportional
representations of three different Correct your spelling
proportional
age
groups in Use synonyms
Yemen
and Italy in Use synonyms
the
2000. The information shows that the Change the article
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age
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group
of 0 to 14 is the biggest in Use synonyms
Yemen
in 2000, Use synonyms
while
it is the lowest in Italy in both 2000 and 2050, illustrating the significant differences Linking Words
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structure between Change preposition
in population
Yemen
and Italy.
In Use synonyms
Yemen
, the Use synonyms
age
Use synonyms
group
of 15 to 51 is expected to rise to 57.3% in 2050, and become the largest in Use synonyms
Yemen
. With regards to the Use synonyms
age
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group
of 0 to 14, the population percentage is projected to decline to 37%, which is the most Use synonyms
fluctuated
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, people in the Linking Words
age
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group
of 60+ Use synonyms
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old still remain the least population in Use synonyms
the
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apply
Yemen
, and the number Use synonyms
grow
marginally from 2000 to 2050, at 3.6% to 5.7%, respectively.
In Italy, it is evident that the Change the verb form
grows
age
Use synonyms
group
of 60+ Use synonyms
years
is forecast to plunge twice as much Use synonyms
2000
as 2050 at 42.3%, Change preposition
in 2000
while
the Linking Words
age
Use synonyms
group
of 15 to 59 Use synonyms
years
Use synonyms
diwindle
from 61.6% to 46.2%, and Correct your spelling
dwindle
dwindled
then
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finally
shared fairly percentage with the Linking Words
age
Use synonyms
group
of 60+ Use synonyms
years
. In stark contrast, most of the pie chart was filled by the above two Use synonyms
age
groups; Use synonyms
thus
, the remaining part only accounts for 11.5% in 2050 by 0 to 14 Linking Words
years
.Use synonyms
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