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You recently visited a place that had a strong impact on you. Write a letter to a friend about the place. In your letter explain where the place was and how you got there “describe what you saw offer to take your friend there

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Dear Michael, How are you doing? Hope you and your family are doing well. It's been a long time since our
last
 meeting. I am back from my recent trip to the United States and pretty excited to share my experience. As
you
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areyou
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 aware, I travelled to Colorado,United States. It all started with our discussion about my long weekend travel. I boarded the flight from Heathrow, London to Phoenix, Arizona, where, I met my friend who accompanied me on the travel. We booked a rental car for travel to Colorado. I am really mesmerised by the scenic beauty. We have experienced different climatic conditions
such
 as sun, rain, and snow. Upon reaching, we camped at the resort with a bonfire and had a party. The
next
 day, we travelled to the ski resort and had a tremendous experience while skiing, where I enjoyed the fun and the fear. I am planning to go again, as I missed many places. I will request you to join with on my
next
 trip to
United
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 States. I bet you will enjoy nature and adventure sports. Meet you soon! Best regards, Vivek V
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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