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Everybody should be allowed admission to university or college programs regardless of their level of academic ability. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In many countries around the world, admissions to universities have been an issue. To be admitted into one depends on how prepared a person is, meaning that not everyone can be allowed in. Many believe that gaining entrance to a university should be allowed regardless of one's academic level and preparation and I agree with
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 should gain access to acceptance as well as clarify my opinion.
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, everybody should have the right to an
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, no matter what their academic level is, a person who has worked more years to get into a college program or a university is not automatically more capable, excluding less fortunate
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 of
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 have different interests but
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 different responsibilities in life.
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, a child can go to a school that does not strive to teach their students, or they have so much responsibility at home,
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 as taking care of siblings or helping their parents, that wanting to focus all their energy on school work and extracurricular activities is not possible for them.
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 it should not be up to a few
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 to decide that one is not worthy of being excepted because they did not do all the work when those
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 do not know what life is like for that specific individual.
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,
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 tend to choose the
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 and courses they best identify with and that fit their abilities. When choosing a course, it is important that
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 feel good about their decisions, not the other way around, which is what happens today when less fortunate
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 mention or apply for courses
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 as law and medicine. I think that it is not fair that some have easier or better opportunities to follow their dreams than others just because they have a better and more serious preparative
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.
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, there are a variety of different
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 that should allow all individuals admission to universities,
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, there is no reason to deny that
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 when there is something for everyone. In conclusion, there are many reasons,
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 as the number of
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 available why
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 should not be denied admission to universities and college
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, so it is time to start including everyone.

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