In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages ?

In
this
modern era , it is undeniable fact that
technology
has equipped people with lots of comforts.
In addition
to
this
, it has been observed that the trend of reading e-
books
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great demand by
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individuals rather than
books
. I ,
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of reading online
books
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the disadvantages. The
first
and foremost merit is that it teaches
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regarding the utilization of
technology
to a great extent and effortlessly . It's
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significant that everyone must know how
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technology
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.
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books
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occupy space and one can easily read these any time and anywhere .
secondly
,most the important factor is that it contributes to the protection of the environment globally as e-
books
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do not
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demand any
paper
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deforestation can be reduced to
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a great level. A survey conducted in New Zealand at
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Auckland
university showed that utilization of online journals over
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paper
books
has reduced
70percent
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of
utilization
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the utilization
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of
paper
which is
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reason
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reduction
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of deforestation nuisance. Apart from
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prevalent which cannot be denied.The major limitation is individuals facing
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related issues
such
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. Because of the emissions of harmful infra radiations from mobile ,portable computers, tablets.
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conducted by
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health organization has shown that 60percent of teenagers ,
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from health issues due to excessive use of
technology
just only for reading
books
over the internet. Summing up, it is undeniable that reading online journals ,
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by individuals over
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paper
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both pins and cons but the merits outweigh the demerits.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • To summarize
  • Finally
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  • In general

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