Many people say that universities should only offer places to young students with the highest marks, while others say they should accept people of all ages, even if they did not do well at school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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advocates argue that universities should

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young

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score . While

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a school of thought believe they might be accepted people in various age brackets whether they didn't have well academic performance at school . In

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am going to cite some justification

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only

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would be offered before giving some disadvantages about

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the door of

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for all

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. From an overall perspective , it is apparent that

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who at the spring age have had high- quality knowledge than others people .

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beneficial for universities even

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enthusiasm as they got

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highest score in their performance .

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interested in their forte subject , they understand the way to sharpen their academic skill in

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On the other hand

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the phenomenon that pay an acceptance for all ages

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who didn't get a high

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. By way of illustration , they usually haven't had adequate

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knowledge to survive in

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atmosphere .

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aforementioned consequences would be caused a domino affects to a world difference

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students

. In conclusion , it is my opinion that many education

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student

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highest score without a doubt. I believe that

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the quality of education and the encouragement of top

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society in the future.