Many people say that universities should only offer places to young students with the highest marks, while others say they should accept people of all ages, even if they did not do well at school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In recent years, there has been a growing trend

towards

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housing, especially in

the

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urban area. While it is evident that temporary housing, including apartments,

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,…, are becoming more popular than ever, we can not deny the fact that there are

also

more and more

people

starting to save up money to buy their

house

- their own

home

. So what exactly urges them to do

such

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from my point of view. There are 2 underlying factors behind the increasing demand

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owning houses. It is apparent that profit is one of the most essential issues we care about when it comes to purchasing something, and buying a

house

is not an exception. Whether you pay the cost of the

house

in full or in

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, it is still predictable about how much you have to pay for it since the

house

’s

price

has been established from the start.

This

situation will not certainly happen when you rent it as the host can always raise the monthly

price

, depending on the market or sometimes, his liking.

Moreover

, apartments are foreseen to increase in

price

in Vietnam due to the shortage of supply.

As a result

,

people

assume it is much safer to buy their own

home

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a stable

price

, which can not be changed by the time they decide to buy it. Another justifiable reason for

this

trend is privacy. You will be your own landlord, in charge of everything in your

home

. Unlike renting one, you can customize your

house

as you see fit, doing whatever you want in it. It is up to you to decide whether everyone can or can not do in your

house

, not any landlord of yours. Due to the reasons above, I believe it is understandable that

people

want to have their own

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.

However

, we should consider our decision thoroughly, specifically our financial situation.

Although

there is a financial benefit as mentioned above, it is inevitable that the

price

of the

house

is insanely high recently. And the more the buying-

house

trend grows, the more

people

are being urged to follow it, even if their financial situation doesn't allow them to.

For instance

, when a couple is about to get married, it is usually traditional for the bride’s family to demand the

groom’s

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to have a

house

for both of them, or else they won’t approve

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wedding. If the groom is not able to afford

such

a thing, the newlyweds will end up starting their new married life by paying debts after buying one due to the pressure received from their family.

Thus

,

this

is a negative case. In conclusion, stable

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and privacy are attributable to

this

growing phenomenon, and the proposed explanation can help you understand better about

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circumstance.