You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter • introduce yourself • say why you are interested in this sports club • ask some questions about the club e.g. facilities, members, costs

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to inquire about the facilities of your sports

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, The Pulse Fitness. I have recently moved to Bengaluru and found out that there is no sports facility in my college. I study at St. Stephen College, Bengaluru, and have taken a physiotherapy course;

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, I am surprised to find out that there is no wellness centre or sports facility in the college. I have been playing football at the state level and

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, I want to continue my practice here.

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, I like to work out regularly in the gymnasium. I have found online that your

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is very close to my hostel, and will be a great fit for me. I would like to know about the facilities available in your

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. Could you please let me know if the football ground and gym facilities are available in your

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, please quote the membership fees monthly and annually both. Please do not forget to mention if there are any extra fees for using the swimming pool. I am looking forward to your prompt response. Please reach out to me on

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number 9901111222. Yours faithfully, Abhishek Chaudhary

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