Famous sports often earn a lot more money than people in other professions. Although sport is important in our lives, everyone should be equal and such big incomes of sport professionals are unjustified

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people have thought that even salaries have to be

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revenues ought to be paid in the same amount. Analyzing the bodily,

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effort and restrictive of the working age, there should be a difference in income.

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view of the fact that

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much skill and diligence. Considering

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demanding job, athletes must become fit and

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to be sick as well if they injure

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their legs, they may never return to the

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of climbing the career ladder.

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huge incomes

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professionals are not unjustified.

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includes a restrictive working age.

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even a skilled worker or a labourer will

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their bodily abilities over the period. As

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consequence

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specialists are taking early retirement.

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sportsmen have to earn

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of salary than others. To summarize,

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clerks train lots of physical and mental zeal and

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embraces limited

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analysis

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subject, it is predicted that athletes will gain lots of

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than other ones.