It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Taking
risks
is a significant thing in our daily life and
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benefits and limitations. Taking
risks
have
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some advantages. To start with, taking
risks
can help
people
to build deciding and thinking
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. In
people
's
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daily
and working life, they need to do millions of decision
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. Some
person
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will think about the
risks
of every alternative. They can choose
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better choices which will lead to
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result
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.
Therefore
, taking
risks
can let
people
think more
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carefully
gleefully
.
In addition
, taking
risks
can increase
people
's efficiency and let
people
work harder. If
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people
think about the result and the risk they need to take if
this
thing is
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, they will work harder in order to avoid loss and
risks
.
For example
, most students will study harder before
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,
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because
becuase
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because
they know the
risks
if they have bad
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grades
grade
garde
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grades
,
therefore
, they will have high efficiency in studying.
On the other hand
, taking
risks
have disadvantages.
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,
this
may cause mental diseases and have bad impacts
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human health. Taking
risks
will give extra stress
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people
. All
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people
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want to
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avoid
aviod
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avoid
risks
, so they will work very hard, but If one person
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too
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risks
to take, he will always live under high pressure and stress.
Then
this
will affect his mental and physical health.
Additionally
, taking
risks
will
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contribute
contibute
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contribute
to illegal things.
For instance
, owners always need to take
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their business. If they failed, they will lose all their money. So some
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will do illegal things in order to survive in the market.
As a result
, taking
risks
may let
people
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commit crimes. In conclusion, it is
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necessary
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necessary
for
people
to take
risks
, but I would argue that advantages are more essential than disadvantages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Opportunities
  • Growth
  • Innovation
  • Challenges
  • Self-discovery
  • Resilience
  • Uncertainty
  • Consequences
  • Calculated risks
  • Stagnation
  • Regret
  • Comfort zone
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  • Adventurous spirit
  • Thriving
  • Failure
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