Some believe that technology, such as mobile phones, cell phones are destroying social interaction. Do you agree or disagree?
It is true that the advent of
technology
such
as smartphones brings people
countless merits. However
, it is also
argued that it have
ruined social interaction. Change the verb form
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This
essay agrees with the given information because it is obvious that people
interacts
with each other less than before.
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technology
like a mobile phone can easily distract one's concentration. It makes people
not focus on the
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others'
words. Correct your spelling
other's
In addition
, they want to avoid meeting in person as much as possible. It's a
common these days to Correct article usage
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Furthermore
, the percentage of people
who enjoy outdoor activities is gradually decreasing because they only like the joy of technology
given by cell phones
or computers. Due to the change, the emotional communion among people
is almost disappeared.
Another factor is that people
do not need to depend on others
anymore. On account of developed technology
, the pleasure of interacting with others
by chance disappeared. For instance
, we often used to get information by asking others
for directions. However
, we have just used their map APP in
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on
phones
nowadays. Customers also
usually order through mobile phones
, not directly from cafes. Thus
, there is no chance to interact a
new person.
To conclude, it is certain that Change preposition
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technology
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interaction between Change the verb form
hinders
people
. They want to replace all communication with technology
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phones
, not others
. Due to the
reasons, I agree that as long as there is Correct your spelling
these
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technology
, humans will still cut
off in the future.Add a missing verb
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