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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

#people #professionals #doctors #engineers #work #country
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this
 world is in severe need of doctors and engineers in every corner of the world as
,
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 they
people
 are real heroes of their nation. Some
people
 consider that
professional
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professionals
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 should
work
on
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 that place from they have done their training. While others believe they should be allowed to
work
 in their desired
country
 if they want. I’m agreed with the
second
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 below. On the one hand, common men of a
country
wants
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 that the professionals
such
 as doctors and engineers should
work
 in the
country
 where they have been trained since if they wish to migrate
to
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abroad for their training
than
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this
country
 will face a shortage of professionals.
Moreover
,
government
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 is providing funds to surgeons and architects to complete their studies, so they
also
 want their give back to the nation.
Thus
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authority
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 should arrange
higher
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 teaching professionals to train them at
superior
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level
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 and doctors and engineers should be rewarded with winsome salary packages, so they don’t find a chance to leave their
country
.
On the other hand
, other
people
 believe that experts are free to
work
 in their desired
country
. From my point
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 view, specialists should be allowed to go to foreign countries for their higher practice and studies since they can find some better opportunities, explore
to
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new
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market
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, get a global network of contacts, and great exposure to their field. They should return back after finalizing their practice to serve
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mankind. in the end,
people
 should go outside of their nation to seek higher education or to perform
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 implementation. One should be allowed to choose their workplace freely.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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