Nowadays, distance-learning have gained in popularity, but some people argue that courses can never be as good as those taken by attending a college or university in person.To what extent do you agree or disagree

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With the advent of rapid internet and convenient software, distance
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become increasingly popular in many countries.
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, some are of the view that online
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cannot surpass the traditional teaching method which requires students to attend college on campus.
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, I partly disagree
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statement because online studies can offer
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while having a few downsides. These days students prefer
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a degree while being in
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full-time employment,
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gives them the opportunity to both
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as well as providing for their
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. With the advent of online
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, students can opt for
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as these lectures are recorded and can be accessed whenever needed.
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can attend lectures at eve after his working hours.
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, can fund a loan with the assistance of his regular income stream.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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