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Some people say that working in different job roles should get different amount of holiday time. Do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion and examples from your own experience.

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Most companies set the same
amount
 of
holiday
 period for all workers.
However
, some people believe that the
holiday
 should be set according to their position and it should not be the same for all. I am not in favour of
this
 statement, and I will give some disadvantages in order to prove it.
First
 of all, if employers set different criteria,
then
 equality among
employees
 may be divided, and they will think that the
company
 is partial to them.
For example
, some
employees
 do a great job in their field, and they have some hope to get profit from the
company
. But if the enterprise will have a very
amount
 of
holiday
time
 or other things separately,
then
 they will hesitate to contribute to the
company
's success.
Hence
, the
company
 can lose its valuable
employees
.
Second
 of all, the
company
 can go to a loss rather than a profit.
Although
 the
company
 need to set
holiday
time
 as per post, the workers must pay for that
amount
 of
time
.
Nevertheless
, companies have to pay huge amounts of paid vacations to various
employees
, and
as a result
, they will have less profit.
On the other hand
, if staff is having extra
holiday
 package,
then
 they can spend quality
time
 with their family and due to that , they will think about
company
's future improvements. In conclusion ,
,
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 some
employees
 will get satisfaction if they will have a high
amount
 of
holiday
, but due to the equality among the
,
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workers
this
 rule must not be followed. So, in my opinion, the
company
 should follow the same thing for all
employees
.
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