SOME PEOPLE SAY MUSIC IS A GOOD WAY OF BRINGING PEOPLE OF DIFFERENT CULTURES AND AGES TOGETHER.TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE?
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believe that music
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music
. Irrespective of their background people
are seen to make new friends and acquantance. Also
in night clubs
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nightclubs
people
dance and make merry to music
. They end up sharing contacts during this
period. An example is the recent Ghana music
awards i
attended with my uncle, I made a new friend after we both danced to davidos new afrobeat song.
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the histories
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form of communication. Also
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