SOME PEOPLE SAY MUSIC IS A GOOD WAY OF BRINGING PEOPLE OF DIFFERENT CULTURES AND AGES TOGETHER. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE
Some
people
believe that music
is a great way of uniting people
of varying cultures and ages. This
essay completely agrees with this
statement because music
shows serve as a platform for socialization and bridges
the gap in cultural differences Change the verb form
bridge
amongst
Change preposition
among
people
.
To begin
with,concerts create an avenue for people
to socialize. During events,people
from all walks of life come together to listen to good tunes of varying genres. Irrespective of their background people
are seen to make new friends and acquantance
. Correct your spelling
acquaintance
acquaintances
Also
in nightclubs people
dance and make merry to music
. They end up sharing contacts during this
period. An example is the recent Ghana music
awards I attended with my uncle, I made a new friend after we both danced to davidos
new afrobeat song.
Correct your spelling
videos
David's
Secondly
,society is unified through songs, in spite of diverse cultures. During festivals
songs are used as a tool to narrate the history and origin of Add a comma
,festivals
people
.As a result
, people
are able to understand the way of life of others through this
form of communication.In addition
,a better understanding of other peoples
Change noun form
people's
culture
through great Fix the agreement mistake
cultures
music
,
enables individuals to accept the. Remove the comma
apply
Also
irrespective of your ethnic background,there is always a common national song that everyone is in tune with. A typical example is the Ghana National anthem which every Ghanaian rises to, whenever it is played.
To sum up,music
brings all and sundry together through
creating avenues for socialization and striking cultural differences amongst everyone.Change preposition
by
Submitted by awojay on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Your opinion
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?