Your friend has been offered a place on course at the university where you studied. He/she would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: -Describe where you lived when you were a student at the university -Recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation -warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation

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Dear Mike, How're you, my buddy? We haven't met each other since we got together

last

year. Hope everything is OK at your end. I am glad to provide you with some tips about finding a place to accommodate in during

this

semester.

Firstly

, I finalised my Statistics diploma in the same educational institute and resided in the university's dormitory. The main Pros of my accommodation were its affordability and convenience;

however

, there were a few cons

such

as the shared bathroom among learners. I can provide you with some tricks regarding procedures to mitigate the previous dilemma in a smart way to have a comfortable stay.

Secondly

, I can recommend several online platforms like the official page of the college, which has posted plentiful advertisements on the available rooms. Another tool to consider is to meet the head of the registrar's office, who is in contact with the real estate office.

Hence

, I believe that you should exert some effort to find something suitable to live in the soonest.

Finally

, please make sure to check the reviews and ratings of potential residential sites before making any decisions. Unfortunately, most young students miss the previous step when choosing their neighbourhoods. I look forward to hearing new updates from you. Please let me know if there are any

further

inquiries. Regards, Mohamed

Submitted by Mohamed Abdel Wanis on Wed Oct 05 2022

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