You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter - describe what you enjoyed about the course -say how much cooking you've done since the course - suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer
Respected sir,
I am writing you
this
letter to give my feedback on the course I had done
with your institute to enhance my cooking skills. My Wrong verb form
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overall
experience while
doing the program was very good because the staff conducted the course very well. All the members of the faculty were helpful and polite in their approach towards participants.
I am glad to tell you that after finishing my classes with the school. I feel more confident in displaying my cooking skills and I have become more enthusiastic in
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food
, which, I had found very difficult to cook before attending the cookery classes. Moreover
, lately
I am planning to open a Add a comma
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food
joint that would help me to grow even further
.
In the end, I would like to request
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have noticed that your school did not offer any course in Change the capitalization
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food
and ever since I had left your cooking school I wanted to writeChange preposition
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I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Maninder.Correct article usage
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Try to break down your information into more distinct paragraphs to improve clarity. For example, you could create separate paragraphs for your enjoyment of the course, your cooking experiences since the course, and your suggestion for a new course.
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Make sure to proofread your text for minor grammatical errors and typos, as these can detract from an otherwise excellent letter. For instance, 'I' should always be capitalized, and phrases like 'moreover, lately' should be revised for clarity.
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The tone of the letter is very polite and appreciative, making it suitable for formal communication.
coherence cohesion
The letter has an introduction, body, and conclusion, which provides a logical and structured format.