A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called "the book that influenced me most". Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter Describe what this book was about explain how this book influenced you say whether this book would be likely to influence other people.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

This

is Mohamed Wanis and I am one of your readers. I have read your article in the magazine for a while. I am writing

this

letter to share with you the book I like the most.

Firstly

, the story was called 4 success street which was written by an Egyptian author Ehab Fekry. The writer is a

life

coach who focused on maintaining the work-

life

balance. if the fulfilment of the goals has been achieved, the person will feel happiness in his/her

life

Secondly

this

literature was a turning point in my

life

due to several causes. Getting out of my comfort zone was the journey I took after my university education. Achieving 4 pillars like religion, mind development, personal hobbies and health to satisfy all personal needs.

Finally

this

piece of art has changed my

life

completely and I started to attend workshops and sessions. I will recommend

this

book to my relatives and friends to attain their goals. I reckon that reading

this

sort of book will strengthen your interpersonal skills and broaden your horizons. I look forward to hearing updates from you. Please let me know if there are any

further

inquiries. Best regards, Mohamed Wanis

Submitted by Mohamed Abdel Wanis on Wed Oct 05 2022

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