Some parents do not allow their children to watch TV during school days. Others allow their children to watch TV as long as their school work is finished. Discuss both views

Some guardians refuse to authorize their

children

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to watch

tv

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programs

progams

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programmes

on weekdays, while others consent

their

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children

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to turn on

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TV

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the TV

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once their

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assignments

assigments

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assignments

are done.

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letting

children

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to

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watch

TV

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after finishing their

school

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assignments

assignment

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might be

accepted

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for

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some

parents

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, I believe

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is a negative influence

for

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teenagers because they rush things to be done to have

time

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for watching

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programs. on the one hand, giving

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consent to a child to enjoy a

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program

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after finishing

school

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is approved

for

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some

parents

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because they believe

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is a motivation for them.

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, many fathers motivated

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their

children

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to make

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homework fast, so they can have

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to enjoy some cartoons. More importantly, some of them install a television inside

children

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's

room

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to make feel them loved.

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, In The United States, California, most

of

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the

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children

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have a television,

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laptop

, and electrical games inside their room, so they can say that their

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loved them a lot.

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, I strongly believe

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is a negative habit for

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because they feel a lot of pressure to get things done to have more

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to play or watch a

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program

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.

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, nowadays more

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believe in discipline as

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main factor

of

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becoming a better student because they believe if the

students

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have

less

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distractions, these will help them to focus on academic

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assignments

assigments

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.

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belief

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strict rules in which

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, electronic games, or cellphones are not allowed during

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days, so

children

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have no temptation to finish quickly their

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assignments

assigments

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to

starting

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play

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playing

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a game.

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,

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this

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is not an easy routine to start,

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is highly recommended by tutors at

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. To explain

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, private schools in Texas do not allow their

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to bring cellphones or any electronic games to the

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, and

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ask to sign a

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in which they are not

authorize

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to have

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, radio,

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phones

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inside their

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's room. I believe

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is a preferable method because it gave the idea to the

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that weekdays

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only for

academic

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task, so pre-teens feel no hurry to get things done. To conclude,

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some

parents

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want their

children

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to enjoy watching a

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program

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, I believe it is preferable to remove all these distractors from home, and help them to commit their weekdays only

for

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school

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, so they can have in mind that

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is just study

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time

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.