international sporting events such as the World Cup Footvall can bring people of different nationalities and cultures together far more than any other multinational gathering. To what extent do you agree with this view?

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Various sports
organization
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organizations
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are concentrating on organizing multinational
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so that
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can bring
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of different
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and
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together far more than any other multinational gathering. I fully agree with the former statement. Both viewpoints will be elucidated in the subsequent paragraphs.
Firstly
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International sporting
events
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like World Cup can help
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people
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to understand about different
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and
nationalities
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of other
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. As sport
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as
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one of the
medium
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to bring
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together. To elucidate, International Cricket Council organizes these international
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every four
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in
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country so that other
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at
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different nations can visit these
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and try to understand the culture and
nationalities
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of these
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.
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, it
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helped in increasing
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tourism in the country which leads to
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an understanding
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of
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cultures
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the cultures
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of these
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.
Secondly
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, it
also
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helped in bringing
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of different
countries
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together to fight or
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for
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the
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common cause.
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countries
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participating in the ICCI world cup 2020 players white
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in
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of the martyr victims
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war.
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effort by players
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in increasing awareness among fans and worldwide.
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put white stickers on their
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shops
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or clothes in
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of
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this
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events
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. In Conclusion. International
events
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can help
people
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in bringing
people
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of multiple
nationalities
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together. They will help in increasing understanding
about
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cultures
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the cultures
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of different
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teams
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and what traditions or rituals they follow in their country.
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, they
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help in increasing awareness
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common
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the common
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cause
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causes
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around the world.
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