Around the world, traffic accidents cause many serious injuries every day. Due to this, some people believe stricter laws are necessary to improve the road safety. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In the modern world,

people

have many accidents every day because of their lack of education. In

this

, case

people

realised that after the accidents they get a serious problem of injuries. Due to that situation, I strongly believe that laws are very necessary to develop road security.

Firstly

,by taking hard laws about the road,

people

will become more understanding and more careful.

For instance

,when I was going with my family to the south of Albania

last

summer,We were going into an accident because the roads were not safe for two reasons.

First

,because the infrastructure is in bad condition and it is so dangerous to travel through them to go somewhere.

For example

,during our travel two cars crashed and

people

died.It is a tragic accident.

This

condition is not good for anyone of us. died. It was a tragic accident. It was not good for anyone of us.

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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