Government investment in arts such as music and theaters is a waste of money. Government must invest that money in public services instead. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is thought by some people that investment of the government in

arts

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is lacking benefits and is a waste of money and time.

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, they should pay attention to investing in public facilities to provide good service to their citizen. I disagree with

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view. On one hand, public services play a crucial role in society, as all citizens need convenience when they go to public places.

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, leaders who are the place owner should focus and provide facilities that they think it is the best for their population. A good illustration of

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is the authority can upgrade transportation

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as a new bus or providing road for bus only, free public internet wifi for any residents.

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, if some public services are charged, they should be at an affordable price and,

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, can provide equality for anybody.

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arts

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have an important influence on living life since humanity will show their emotions through music, comics or movie.

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, there should be places in order to display the performance of artists

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as theatres, museums or concerts.

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, certain

arts

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perform the original tradition spread to a worldwide level, it can draw the attention of the mass.

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, if traditional

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are shown in the worldwide space, it will attract any men who are interested to come to see it with their eyes.

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, the state should not desert all types of art. To conclude, the government is able to balance between public services and

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, As both these will affect to satisfaction of anyone.

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Cultural enrichment
National identity
Fiscal responsibility
Economic stimulus
Heritage preservation
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Social welfare
Quality of life
Educational outreach
Public versus private funding
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