Transport delays and long journey are widespread phenomenon in many cities today. What are the causes of this problem, and how could the situation be improved?
Automobiles like
airoplanes
,ships,trains and cars are used for Correct your spelling
aeroplanes
estended
journeys all over the world.Correct your spelling
extended
Quickest
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The quickest
route
for railways and national highways have been created and maintained over time to smoothen Fix the agreement mistake
routes
the
land communication.Correct article usage
apply
Eventually
airways and waterways are much faster Add a comma
,Eventually
in
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apply
compared
to Replace the word
comparison
the
other land mobiles.But,it seems noncompliance Correct article usage
apply
to
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with
punctuality
of the vehicles Add an article
the punctuality
have
increased exponentially.According to a bird's eye view,there are Change the verb form
has
few
major reasons for Correct article usage
a few
such
delay and they can be controlled by certain methods.
Within last
few decades,there has been a huge increase in population all over the world.Correct article usage
the last
As a result
,this
has lead
to Wrong verb form
led
surge
in residential areas and Add an article
a surge
narrowing
of empty lands and areas.Correct article usage
the narrowing
For example
,metropolitan cities like mumbai
face enormous traffic jams Change the capitalization
Mumbai
on
every Change preposition
apply
weekdays
due to decreased roadways and more Change to a singular noun
weekday
number of
personalised cars.On Correct quantifier usage
apply
a
contrary Correct article usage
the
Change the capitalization
Mumbai
mumbai
locals use trains more than Add a comma
,mumbai
bus
or autos available.Unfortunately,due to Fix the agreement mistake
buses
higher
population,the railways Correct article usage
the higher
gets
overloaded.
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get
However
,other natural calamities like snow,fogs
and mists Fix the agreement mistake
fog
also
causes
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cause
delay
in Add an article
a delay
Add a hyphen
long-distance
long distance
travelling of passengers.Thankfully, developed countries have well Add a hyphen
long-distance
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equipped
equiped
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equipped
machineries
to remove snow and Change the wording
machinery
types of machinery
pieces of machinery
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advanced
adavnced
airways to take off and land during harsh winter and foggy climates.
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advanced
Goverment
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Government
authories
all over the world must take Correct your spelling
authorises
authorities
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the initiatives
initiatives
of building more roadways and highways in both urban and rural areas for travelling.Reducing of usage of non-conventional automobiles must Fix the agreement mistake
initiative
also
be Correct your spelling
encouraged
encourged
more to reduce Correct your spelling
encouraged
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air pollution
air-pollution
as well.
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air pollution
Therefore
,All of us have a role to play in reducing the delay in transportation both long and short distance
.If strict rules are maintained and executed,Fix the agreement mistake
distances
then
the
punctuality will be under control again.Correct article usage
apply
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