Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

In today’s world, a group of pupils at the same
time
of studying have a part-
time
job
either which sometimes they do not have enough
time
for studying and they will get pressure and anxiety. The major reason for
this
type of
job
is to make
money
and if you have strong planning skills, you should be fine with doing both, which I discussed in
this
essay.
To begin
, the main point of doing a part-
time
job
and working while studying is to make
money
. Most of the teenagers at that
time
wanted to spend
money
to enjoy their life with their friends.
For example
, when I arrived in Canada, I could not spend like when I was in Iran because we did not have much
money
for that, but when I start working I could buy whatever I want.
Therefore
, students want to work to have their own
money
for fun purposes. Meanwhile, if someone has the ability to
time
managing and plan, he will deal with both his
job
and school at the same
time
.
This
means, he should not worry about having
time
for doing assignments,
as a result
, he is not under pressure.
For instance
, I always write what I have to do in a day and week including my homework and the day I have to go to my
job
, by knowing all of them I could arrange a nice plan to keep both sides together.
Thus
, planning skills can be a helpful solution. To conclude, a group of students in high school and university like to earn
money
so they apply for a
job
meanwhile, some of them can not make a balance between their education and
job
which will lead them to pressure but with a great timing plan,
this
problem can be solved easily.
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  • Financial necessity
  • Tuition
  • Living costs
  • Employability
  • Work experience
  • Under pressure
  • Mismanagement
  • Time-management
  • Academic pursuits
  • Flexible part-time study
  • Financial aid
  • Scholarships
  • Bursaries
  • Collaboration
  • Integrated programs
  • Education
  • Work-life balance
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