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Nowadays some individuals behave in an anti-society way, such as committing a crime. In general, it is the society to blame. What causes the anti-social behaviors of individuals? Who should be responsible for dealing with it?

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An increase of anti-society
people
 extremely affects many societies. Some of these
people
 have behaviour abnormalities. In the following paragraph, the statement will be discussed in detail before the conclusion is reached.
To begin
 with, some individuals have their own personality, it is true that every
people
 have a different character but some of them act like they don’t want to do anything which other
people
 normally do or try to disrupt and destroy everything.
Moreover
, many abnormalities can lead to
behaviours
 abnormalities,
for example
, some brain injury patients behave like they want to live alone and try to separate themselves from others because only some parts of their brains can respond, which affects their
behaviours
. As well as some
people
 have bad experiences about themselves and are scared to connect with society,
such
 as some children see a murderer kill their parents, and
this
 situation leads to scaring strangers and they will not agree to talk or participate with anyone.
However
, anti-social behaviour should be managed by psychologists because psychologists know how to manage their symptoms and try to help them in the proper ways. Their
families
 should be responsible for them because
families
 provide the most powerful energy for them, and some of them, trust only their
families
.
Furthermore
, the most powerful system of management is the government which should provide some policies to help them. In conclusion,
behaviours
’ abnormality and bad experiences lead to anti-social
behaviours
 which should be controlled and managed by the government,
families
 and psychologists. Managing these
behaviours
 is the best way to help them and bring them into the whole society in the future.
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