In spite of technological developments in transportation, many people believe that a bicycle is the best way to reach any destination. What are the advantages and disadvantages of using a bicycle nowadays?

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There is no iota of doubt that technology has reached every nook and corner of the world,
however
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some masses considered that
bicycle
is a better medium of conveyance to reach
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any end of the urban areas despite
of
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the advanced transportation growth.
This
essay will illustrate the merits and demerits of
this
trend in the forthcoming paragraphs. To commence with the pros, the gaudiest one is that cycling reduces pollution and
also
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the physical wellness of a person. To elaborate,
bicycle
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does not emit harmful gasses like other automobiles which
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the spread of air and noise pollution.
Moreover
, it
also
plays a significant role in maintaining
fitness
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of an individual because cycling is
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best exercise that helps in lowering
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body weight.
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recent research from WHO (World Health Organization) observed that daily use of
bicycle
results in
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a reduction
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of heart diseases,
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obesity and
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the
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body posture.
Thus
, it can be argued without any scepticism that using a cycle has
plethora
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of benefits. Shifting towards the cons that how riding a
bicycle
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longer
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time and
not
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suitable for
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a longer
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journey.
In other words
, it is a daunting task to ride a cycle for more than 10kms in
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congested traffic situations and
also
take
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amount of time as compared to other motor vehicles
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results
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in delay.
For example
, a headline from BBC (British Broadcasting Corporation) in 2010, claimed that only 10% of the population in America use
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due to ineffective traffic management.
Therefore
, there is no doubt that using a
bicycle
for extended hours
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some drawbacks which cannot be snubbed. In conclusion,
although
this
phenomenon has optimistic outcomes
such
as reduce in
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environmental
enviornmental
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environmental
pollution and health benefits,
yet
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using it for
far away
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destinations has
it
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ill effects.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • eco-friendly
  • cardiovascular fitness
  • urban pollution
  • congestion
  • cycling infrastructure
  • weather dependency
  • vulnerable
  • initial purchase
  • ongoing maintenance
  • secure storage
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