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It is often though that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in media. Do you agree that this is the main cause of juvenile crime? What solutions can you offer to deal with this situation?

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Media
 is affecting to young generation negatively and positively. Sometimes, it is seen that the violence in
media
 is boosting crime among children.
Although
 there are many reasons for juvenile offences and I think the
media
 is one of the main reasons. I will give reasons why I am blaming to
media
 for
this
 and will recommend some solutions as well. Social and television
media
 are both responsible for
this
. They present news in a very violent way on their given platforms, and
hence
 it put very negative effects on child's minds.
For example
, youngsters always prefer to watch tv or social
media
 in their leisure time, and when they continuously watch crime
,
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 and violence in
media
, they might start to follow their footpaths.
Moreover
, children
also
 learn how to commit a crime through the various ways that the
media
 show in their news. There are many solutions to deal with
this
 situation.
First
 of all, parents have to keep eye on their children means they have to take care of what they are watching on tv and social
media
.
Additionally
, they can set a time frame to see particular programs or news.
Second
 of all,
Media
 has to take care as well of what are they presenting to the world and society. If they are telecasting something which is not good for the community,
then
 society has to take steps to overcome or prevent that , and
also
 should complain about that to the police. In conclusion, it is fact that
media
 plays important role in the community, but people
also
 have to come ahead so that the
media
 would not allow the broadcasting of any violent material without permission.
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