Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

These days, some children spend an undeniable time on mobile

phones

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various reasons. In my ,opinion

although

smartphones

are one of the biggest inventions of human beings, they can cause so many problems and they can'

t

be accounted as a 100% positive development. I believe there are 3 main reasons that cause kids to be addicted to handphones,

firstly

these devices include diverse and interesting games which attract not only children but

also

adults,

therefore

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think it's understandable why children love these games.

Secondly

since over the recent years, most families live in apartments so they don'

t

have a proper place

such

as a yard for scion to play, so kids turn to mobiles

instead

of playing physically inevitably and

finally

, most of the parents work outside the home in our modern life so they are too busy to spend time with their scions and

as a result

, mobile

phones

become infants' friend and fulfil their demand of playmate. In my opinion,

smartphones

are one of the greatest human inventions but I

also

believe that

however

smartphones

play an important role in today's life, so many drawbacks can be considered for them that can completely affect human lives.

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instance, the majority

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of today's

oftoday's

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of today's

cellular

phones

include social

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and countless people have accounts on them as well as

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think 90% of the users are addicted to these applications and they can'

t

spend even an hour without their dial.

Furthermore

, if you ask me I would say that cellular

phones

have kept people apart and

as a result

, so many people have faced depression and a sense of loneliness over the recent years. Due to the mentioned reasons, I think though

smartphones

can help us a lot, they can

also

damage our lives too so they can'

t

be called a 100% positive development. In conclusion, I once again restate my point of view that different factors play an important part in the accuracy of

this

phenomenon that offspring spend a lot of time on mobiles .

In addition

, I think hince, so many cons can be counted for mobile

phones

,

therefore

they are not a completely positive development