the maps below show an industrial area in the town of norbiton

the maps below show an industrial area in the town of norbiton
The maps illustrate the substantial changes in the industrial
area
and future development in the
town
, called Norbiton.
Overall
, it can be seen that Norbiton will be turned from an industrial
area
into a residential community.
Firstly
, the industrial
area
has numerous factories which are located around the roundabout.
Secondly
, it has a river along the farmland, in the North of the
area
. The
area
has no house or any other building. In the future development of
this
area
, considerable changes took place in
this
town
as the number of residential buildings increased which are located in the North of the
area
, next to farmland, and distributed in the
town
.
Moreover
, public structures are built in the
town
, including shops, medical centre, playground and school. My mother accommodate the food before l returned home
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