You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter Say why he/she would not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

Dear Mary, Congratulation!! I am thrilled to find out about your graduation ceremony and achievement. Now, it's time for you to apply theoretical knowledge and get some practical experience. As you know, after graduation I joined the MBA school and faced a lot of difficulties to get good scores in exams. Half the time, I spent in the classes

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the basic concepts so,I got a short time left for exam preparation. Ultimately, with a low ,GPA I struggled in my initial job years. I want you to learn from my mistakes and start a job hunt immediately

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of applying for the business master courses. If you spend one year in a corporate environment, trust me you will understand the business strategies backwards and forwards. As well, it will help you to improve your communication skills and you will be able to communicate in English with others like native people. I know your ambitions and career plan that's why

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I would suggest you apply for the trainee management role in the supply chain domain. In that industry, you will get the opportunity to apply learnt concepts in your bachelor's and can demonstrate skills which you acquired while working in the shops. I wish you all the best to start your new journey. Please let me know if

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all makes sense to you. Yours lovingly, Prajakta