Some people say that advertisement encourages us to buy things we really do not need. Other say that advertisement tells us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoints do you agvreee with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In
this
modern era, companies
advertise their products to enhance their business. Many people argue that if we see an advertisement of
any item Change preposition
for
then
we want to buy that we do not need. Meanwhile, some believe that Correct your spelling
advertisement
advertisment
give us information about Correct your spelling
advertisements
latest
hoods that improve our lifestyle. I partially agree with both opinions and the following paragraphs will Correct article usage
the latest
highlights
my opinion with relevant examples.
Change the verb form
highlight
To begin
with, there are several brands of clothes and they advertisement about their new collections to promote their products. Moreover
, these brands use many types of platforms to promotion
Replace the word
promote
such
as TV commercials and social media pages. For instance
, every company announced their end of season
sales and discounts. in Add a hyphen
end-of-season
this
way
many people bought things that they do not need at that time and Add a comma
,way
waste
their time and money. Wrong verb form
wasted
However
, some believes
that these articles are on less at the moment and will be useful Change the verb form
believe
next
year.
On the other hand
, many companies
of household items advertise their Correct your spelling
machinery
machinary
when they add additional features to them. Correct your spelling
machinery
Further
, these companies
compete with other foreigner
products and use instruments like them. Replace the word
foreign
For example
, in washing machines and refrigerators, companies
tell us through their adds
to make out lives easier. Correct your spelling
ads
In addition
, it is Add an article
a benefit
benefit
for us because we can gain new information Replace the word
beneficial
by
ads.
In the conclusion, it is in our Change preposition
through
hand
to buy things we need or used Fix the agreement mistake
hands
advertisement
in Fix the agreement mistake
advertisements
positive
. So, I argued about both aspects. Advertisements in any sense are useful.Correct article usage
a positive
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