Some people say that advertisement encourages us to buy things we really do not need. Other say that advertisement tells us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoints do you agvreee with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In
this
modern era,
companies
advertise their products to enhance their business. Many people argue that if we see an advertisement
of
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any item
then
we want to buy that we do not need. Meanwhile, some believe that
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advertisement
advertisment
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advertisements
give us information about
latest
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hoods that improve our lifestyle. I partially agree with both opinions and the following paragraphs will
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my opinion with relevant examples.
To begin
with, there are several brands of clothes and they advertisement about their new collections to promote their products.
Moreover
, these brands use many types of platforms to
promotion
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such
as TV commercials and social media pages.
For instance
, every company announced their
end of season
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sales and discounts. in
this
way
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many people bought things that they do not need at that time and
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their time and money.
However
, some
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that these articles are on less at the moment and will be useful
next
year.
On the other hand
, many
companies
of household items advertise their
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machinery
machinary
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machinery
when they add additional features to them.
Further
, these
companies
compete with other
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products and use instruments like them.
For example
, in washing machines and refrigerators,
companies
tell us through their
adds
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ads
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to make out lives easier.
In addition
, it is
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benefit
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for us because we can gain new information
by
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ads. In the conclusion, it is in our
hand
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to buy things we need or used
advertisement
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in
positive
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. So, I argued about both aspects. Advertisements in any sense are useful.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuasive power
  • impulse buying
  • awareness
  • innovations
  • perceived needs
  • artificially generated
  • educational aspect
  • informed decisions
  • social media and influencer marketing
  • non-essential luxury items
  • competitive market
  • visibility
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