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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It is concluded by few people that in order to become an excellent member of society the teaching should be taught by
parents
, whereas the rest think that the school is responsible for
this
. In my opinion,
parents
 should be the
first
 ones to provide
this
 environment.
This
 essay will analyse both perspectives.
First
 of all,
kids
 do not attend school as soon as they start speaking so they spend their days with their
parents
.
For example
,
parents
 are said to be the
first
 teacher as they have the right to teach the
kids
.
Second
, it could give an opportunity to build a close relationship with each other.
On the other hand
, there are some drawbacks, as some
parents
 do not have the knowledge to teach their
kids
.
However
, the majority of people say that school is the best place in regards to making them the best in society.
Firstly
, schools have the best equipment which provides
kids
 with the necessary learning to become
a great individuals
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great individuals
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.
Moreover
,
kids
 from different cultures may have good and bad influences on their behaviour and there is competition in schools which brings the
kids
 to fight for themselves in order to prove themselves. In summary, lessons taught by
parents
 need more structure and support as they may lack some education, but it is better if the schools do these steps so that the
kids
 learn from both backgrounds. Personally, I believe that the personality of the
parents
 affects what kind of member the
kids
 become in society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • good members of society
  • teach
  • parents
  • schools
  • responsibility
  • values
  • respect
  • empathy
  • responsibility
  • formal education
  • citizenship
  • ethics
  • social responsibility
  • lead by example
  • role models
  • conducive environment
  • extracurricular activities
  • community involvement
  • collaborate
  • holistic approach
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