Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is concluded by few people that in order to become an excellent member of society the teaching should be taught by

parents

, whereas the rest think that the school is responsible for

this

. In my opinion,

parents

should be the

first

ones to provide

this

environment.

This

essay will analyse both perspectives.

First

of all,

kids

do not attend school as soon as they start speaking so they spend their days with their

parents

.

For example

,

parents

are said to be the

first

teacher as they have the right to teach the

kids

.

Second

, it could give an opportunity to build a close relationship with each other.

On the other hand

, there are some drawbacks, as some

parents

do not have the knowledge to teach their

kids

.

However

, the majority of people say that school is the best place in regards to making them the best in society.

Firstly

, schools have the best equipment which provides

kids

with the necessary learning to become

a great individuals

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great individuals

a great individual

show examples

.

Moreover

,

kids

from different cultures may have good and bad influences on their behaviour and there is competition in schools which brings the

kids

to fight for themselves in order to prove themselves. In summary, lessons taught by

parents

need more structure and support as they may lack some education, but it is better if the schools do these steps so that the

kids

learn from both backgrounds. Personally, I believe that the personality of the

parents

affects what kind of member the

kids

become in society.