covenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and tradtional methods of food preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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foods

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have become increasingly popular among individuals

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of hectic lifestyles. Some individuals think that the availability of traditional

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and cooking techniques will be threatened by the rising popularity of these

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in the future.

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, I strongly disagree with

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perspective. It is true that many people nowadays are so engrossed in their jobs that they do not have enough time to cook and

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foods

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are an attractive option. These

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have greatly improved in terms of

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quality and availability.

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, the range for sale in the average supermarket is quite impressive.

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, it is straightforward to come across at any

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and get a meal in

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minutes.

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, I strongly claim that ready-prepared

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could not replace traditional

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due to

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nutritious

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, cultural values, and cost

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of all, eating at home is much better for our health than eating outside.

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, at home when cooking for ourselves, we can ensure that what goes into our

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is not bad for us, or even we can control the amount of oil and salt we use and balance our diet to suit our own needs as well.

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food

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is pale in comparison with traditional cuisine in terms of cost-saving. You spend a lot of money on

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, and in some cases, you don’t really get value for the money. Most of the dish's cost is exaggerated, maybe because of the status of the restaurant and other facts

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, traditional

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are crucial aspects and social values. In many countries, traditional

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are the time of family gatherings that strengthens the strong bond among family members.

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, important celebrations

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as weddings, birthdays, Christmas, and Vietnamese New Year are marked by traditionally prepared feasts. In conclusion, it is clear not to refuse the practical advantages that fast

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is delivering to the modern lifestyle nowadays.

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, highly consuming of these products should not be advised to people's health in the long distant future due to their unreliable quality.

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, individuals may choose dining at home in terms of its meaningful and healthy aspects

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