The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned 

future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and 

make comparisons where relevant.
The given first map shows the present state of the industrial
area
in the
town
of Norbiton.
On the other hand
, the second map is the renovation plan for the future developed Norbiton
town
. The key difference between the present
,
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and the upcoming design of Norbiton is in the future, there will be a road to cross the
river
and
to
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connect it with the previous
bridge
. At the same time, it has been planned to create housing for the residents
also
, shops , a medical centre, a school ,and a playground for the habitats. On both maps, the
town
is on the west side. In the first map, it is shown that it was an industrial
area
. There were factories all along the southeast
area
. At the same time, there is no
bridge
or road to cross the
river
. There was
town
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in the middle of a
bridge
and
river
. In the upcoming plan, there will be a
bridge
connecting to the previous
bridge
, and that will
also
make the way to cross the
river
. Meanwhile, the biggest change is creating
housings
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alongside
to
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the connecting
bridge
. After crossing the
bridge
, there will be farmland. As there will be a residential
area
, people will need some other facilities near them, so
according to
the plan, there will be shops, a medical centre , a playground ,and a school.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words area, town, river, bridge with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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