Economic progress is the most important part of a nation, other people think otherwise, discuss both views and give your opinion

It is considered by some individuals that the financial

growth

of a state is the most essential part of the

nation

, while others believe

growth

in other

sectors

is more essential. In my opinion, I think the improvement in other aspects of the

country

is more important than just financial

growth

. On the one hand, notable

growth

in the financial sector of a

nation

is considered to be most important because of some factors. One major factor is that money is needed to maintain all other

sectors

of the

economy

. In other

sectors

of the

country

ranging from agriculture to

health

and security, funds are required to run effectively. These funds can only be provided by the growing

economy

of that

country

.

Furthermore

,

growth

in the

economy

could signify security for the state. By

this

I mean, financial stability would bring stability to other aspects of the

country

and help them maintain its stand amongst other nations of the world.

For example

, countries with strong economies are more respected globally.

On the other hand

,

growth

in some other departments of the

nation

is more important than progress in the

economy

. One

of

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sector is the

health

sector. A healthy

nation

translates to a wealthy

nation

because when the citizens of a

nation

are in good

health

, they have the strength to pay taxes and contribute to the

economy

.

For example

, during an epidemic, there is an economic decline.

In addition

,

growth

in the human capital of a

nation

is

also

more important than economic

growth

. When people are trained in diverse disciplines, they make a significant contribution to the

growth

of the

nation

. In conclusion, while others believe

growth

in the

economy

is more essential because of the role money plays in sustaining other aspects of the

country

and in security, I think

growth

in other

sectors

such

as

health

and human capital is more important.