In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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It is widely believed that a significant amount of the world's population does not have

food

, even though agriculture has improved. In

this

essay, I will analyse the reasons for

this

situation and explain what are the remedial measures that can be taken to settle the issue.

Firstly

, poverty is the main cause that

people

have to starve. In simple words, despite the foods being available in the market, they do not have enough money to buy them. In fact, most of the workers who are in low-income countries are paid minimum wages.

However

, the implantation of those nations has increased ten times.

Consequently

, their ability to buy

food

has decreased and it leads to

people

going hungry.

Secondly

people

suffer from social discrimination and it negatively affects their hunger.

This

is because, some

people

do not have

food

shops in the local or proper transport system to reach the city area, where they can buy

food

Furthermore

, some

food

sellers consider skin colour, language, race or religion before selling their products. So, these causes may be behind the

people

still lack of

food

. There are a few actions that can be implemented to curb

this

scenario. Mainly, the government can arrange a token system for poverty

people

who are deprived of hunger.

For instance

, in India, their government have launched a programme, which is named ‘Eliminate Hunger’ and

this

has helped more than 500,000

people

in India.

In addition

while

improving basic salary, implantation must be reduced.

Then

it will empower the

people

and improve their ability to buy

food

. In conclusion, there is no argument, that many

people

have suffered from hunger, though technology has improved agriculture. Poverty,

as well as

disparity in the community,in the

the

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governments have a responsibility to settle

this

issue by arranging some donations and increasing the income of their

people

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

315 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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Topic Vocabulary:

inequality
distribution
access to resources
climate change
natural disasters
political factors
economic factors
agricultural practices
infrastructure
transportation
population growth
education
knowledge
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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Nowadays more and more children are being brought up in single-parent families. What are the causes of this? What effects can be seen as a result of this?

In spite of many advances women have made in education and employment, they continue to be at a disadvantage when it comes to pay and promotion. In your view, what should be done to promote equality of opportunity for men and women in the workplace.

Write a letter to your manager to nominate a person for the best employee of the year award. Explain in your letter:  Who this person is  Why you choose him/her  What the characteristics of the good employee are

Describe a career that requires a lot of hard work, but is rewarding in the end. What is the job, and why is it rewarding despite the challenges? Give specific details to support your answer.

News editor decide what to to broadcast on television and what to print in newspaper. What factors do you think influence these dicisions? Do we bacame used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?