In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message

In a few places, most offspring believe that if they make an effort to do something after they can attain whatever they want.

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essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of trying hard to achieve

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something and provide a logical conclusion. The two main advantages of  attempting hard  to achieve anything may bring a good

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and ultimate motivation for his or her

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work

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or mission.

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, having

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to do something like complete the tasks of

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book is good for people’s forthcoming  national exams, because if they try to do it

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and

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their exams might be without any mistakes and

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show its excellent

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, even if someone has

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activity or

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and he or she would be

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to do it after they

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they react to their

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afterwards

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sort of position

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its good

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an everlasting motivation for their willingness to do

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again.

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, trying too hard to do something has some major disadvantages like their

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hard efforts might be

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and cause stress. Some children make an effort hard to do something and they cannot handle

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, even if they had a talent

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field. Afterwards, all of

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may be

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things

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.

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, if somebody going to do something with

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attempt after certainly, there might be lots of depression and pressure duration of working if

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unable to achieve

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. To conclude,

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there are some disadvantages of attempting to do something hard like strains and

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mirage, it has an extremely positive impact to make an excellent

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and

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enthusiasm.