Some say that sports play an important role in society. Others, however, think that it is nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In our day-to-day ,

activities

sports

play an important role. Playing

sports

is good for our health physically and mentally. There are so many different types of

sports

such

as football,

cricket

, badminton, tennis etc. Each and every

game

have

there

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own importance. Through these ,

sports

we get a lot of legends for our country. In my opinion ,

sports

have a great role in society because today the youth

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highly interested in these fields. Promoting the youngsters to

sports

field gave a great achievement to the Nation. There were a lot of legends who came origin in our country through

sports

especially

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the

cricket

god Sachin Tendulkar. He came from a middle-class family but he achieved everything in the sport of

Cricket

. Roger a famous Tennis player, Chistina Ronaldo a famous player in football, Neeraj Chopra a famous player in Javelin Throw etc made an achievement in outdoor

sports

. In indoor ,

sports

Viswanath Anand won in Chess.

Then

there were a lot of

sports

in the indoor games

also

such

as swimming etc. Each and every legend formed not in one day its origin happens only because of several days of hard work.

Moreover

, others think that

sports

are nothing more than leisure

activities

. We can take one Golf as an example.

This

is an outdoor

game

. But

this

game

is played only by certain people especially rich ones and poor ones cannot

affordable

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for playing

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this

game

. Certain people think that playing

cricket

and football is useless and not meaningful because they

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that it's a waste of time. They make their children highly concentrated through studies. Another way they might think going to

sports

makes their children

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score low marks. In conclusion,

sports

are good

activities

and one must follow their life. Physically and mentally we

became

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strong and certain types of diseases might not affect us. Without these types of ,

activities

we will become lazy. So don't make our body unhealthy make it wealthy. " If wealth is lost something, but if health is lost everything is lost" .