Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would be benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?
A small group of
people
believe people
who are younger need to do volunteer jobs without profit in their spare time to support the local community
and society
. They think this
would be contributed to the community
and be good for themself. I strongly agree with the ideas for the reasons given below.
Firstly
, it is understandable why some argue that good for teenage because teenagers
usually wasted their time playing videos game. Their argument might be predicated on the assumption that teenagers
can turn off computers and contribute to society
For example
supporting disabled people
or older people
, Therefore
preventing bad behaviour and doing the right thing like helping disabled people
or cleaning the polluted river is the better way to prevent teenagers
from the video game and spend time for good activities.
Secondly
, I believe that adolescents can help the community
to prevent pollution and global warming. One reason for this
belief is an unpaid job like cleaning the polluted river and planting trees is good for the local society
. If a teenager joined a volunteer club it would help them have good behaviour and which can help them contribute to the community
to resolve environmental issues allows to make society
better. Hence
, stop global warming and the pollution problem.
In conclusion, for the reasons listed, I strongly believe that there are no disadvantages or advantages when forcing teenagers
to do community
jobs which have not profitable. But if the teenagers
do volunteer jobs it can be better for the community
and help them prevent bad behaviour and become good people
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
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- thirdly
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- moreover
- also
- for example
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- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite